Night Mistress

“I have a message from the Rio.” he stated flatly. I think you mean "Roi" here, right? like i said, take the time to re-read over you stuff. it's getting ...

interesting.

exciting! update soon.

Hmmm. This is too short to be a story and it feels more like a summary or perhaps a prologue? Either way, I think you should change the format and ...

it's very good. i like it. maybe you should continue it.

It's interesting.

in my opinion, it's one of the goods. I would read it over again and again. but that'sjust me.

Suzanne is right! you need to add more, give it some background.

sounds like interesting book. i might check it out.

Interesting. You need to add more. Give background on bothe character like how met and how they fell in love with each other.

like it. will read another chapters too.

like it.

be careful. some of stuff that you wanted italics, didn't get it. like. will read the other chapter.

this is written very well. add another piece soon.

ok...interesting.